The poet should try and build his life up to be more happier and less depressed. He needs to get his life in check and plan for the future and not the moment.
Relationship wise, my opinion is the same. Why wouldn't want to spend my days sleeping with "whores" and living in hour to hour motel rooms. I would want more in life.
He shouldn't be content and like the way he's living. He has such a hard life. He should strive and aim to fix his life up and stop depending on the whores to help him out.
The poet doesn't get much support from either of his parents. We were able to find out about his past. His dad was abusive to both his more and him.
The abuse has effected him in such a way that cannot be fixed. He is mentally beaten. Thats maybe why he is living the life he is.
I agree with you that the poet should want more for himself! You made good points but in terms of the structure of your post, I think you could have used more sentences in your paragraph instead of writing 2 sentences then making a new one. Other than that good job!
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