This term so far has helped me grown as a student. in terms of being responsible, dedicated, and organized. entering English 10 I didn't expect to be able to understand and comprehend so quickly.
A-In class I'm participating, listening and learning. I usually come to class if not my absences are excused. during class I spend majority of the time on task but there are sometimes when "I ride the elephant".
B-All of my assignments have been handed in... some have been late but I have already discussed the reason.
C- I put effort and concentration into each and every piece of work that I post. My work compared to Gaby's varies in size and vocabulary. You can tell that gaby puts more time into her work compared to mine. I could improve by not rushing and finishing things quicker rather then procrastinating!
D- My participation in class is more socially than verbally. I don't like speaking in front of the class due to anxiety, but with English 10 being online I am able to express my opinion in more ways then one. during out introduction post at the beginning of the year, Joven was having trouble's with coming up with a good topic sentence. we both brain stormed different options. we came up with a great opening sentence, "Every one says how being a teenager is so much easier then being an adult. According to most adult's teenagers don't have any responsibilities and commitments." I also helped Gaby and Erlynn with reading their work and helping them improve.in my opinion the best comment I wrote to help contribute to the class discussions was " Hes explaining how love is complicated and takes time, the line "What is it else? a madness most discreet," He tells us how love is madness and it secretly drives you crazy and insane." this was written on part 4 from the translations of Romeo and Julliet.
Over all I think that I deserve a 75% or 76%.
I love your example of helping a peer in class and the sentence you chose. A couple things to consider from my view. Handing in assignments late means I don't see them (and your peers can't read them) until much later than intended because I move on and have to find time down the road to go back and read stuff. I just re read your tattoo post and it is great, but it doesn't have the same value to our group as it could have. You writing is strong but you make small mistakes (it feels to me like you are rushing through) so have a friend with solid grammar skills skim it for you. Capitals is an easy one to fix… all new sentences, "I", and all proper nouns (names of stuff) need capitals. I think you will find even more value in how we run this class if you get immediate feedback on work because it is done on time. You have much to share with us, I look forward to a more timely Unjali the second half. :)
ReplyDeletegood self review unjali, I think you were honest and fair. I hope to see you put more time in your work to be the best because I know you can do it!
ReplyDeletelike other people need (including moi) you need to put some evidence in your posts. so dont worry about it, youre not the only one
ReplyDeleteGreat job breaking up the different topics and providing detail for each one.
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